Your Personal Statement is one of the few places colleges get to hear your voice directly. This review focuses on helping your essay feel memorable, authentically you, and effective.
What's Included
Line-by-line review
Structure and organization feedback
Voice and authenticity assessment
Clarity and effectiveness recommendations
Deliverables
Summary of strengths and areas of opportunity as it relates to content
Comments and suggested edits directly on your Personal Statement
Suggestions for tightening, correcting and/or polishing
Turnaround Time
72 hours (once all materials are received). Work will not start until all deliverables are in.
AI-Generated Writing
To provide meaningful feedback, I need to review writing that reflects the student’s own voice. I will not review essays that include sentences or paragraphs written by generative AI tools such as ChatGPT.
Your Personal Statement is one of the few places colleges get to hear your voice directly. This review focuses on helping your essay feel memorable, authentically you, and effective.
What's Included
Line-by-line review
Structure and organization feedback
Voice and authenticity assessment
Clarity and effectiveness recommendations
Deliverables
Summary of strengths and areas of opportunity as it relates to content
Comments and suggested edits directly on your Personal Statement
Suggestions for tightening, correcting and/or polishing
Turnaround Time
72 hours (once all materials are received). Work will not start until all deliverables are in.
AI-Generated Writing
To provide meaningful feedback, I need to review writing that reflects the student’s own voice. I will not review essays that include sentences or paragraphs written by generative AI tools such as ChatGPT.
