Supplemental essays and UC PIQs matter more than many students realize. Strong supplements can help demonstrate fit, intellectual curiosity, and genuine interest in a college.
What's Included
Review of 1 supplemental essay
Prompt alignment evaluation
Content and structure feedback
Voice and clarity recommendations
Evaluation of ways to strengthen and polish
Deliverables
Summary of strengths and areas of opportunity as it relates to content
Comments and suggested edits directly on your Personal Statement
Suggestions for tightening, correcting and/or polishing
Turnaround Time
72 hours (once all materials are received)
AI-Generated Writing
To provide meaningful feedback, I need to review writing that reflects the student’s own voice. I will not review essays that include sentences or paragraphs written by generative AI tools such as ChatGPT.
Supplemental essays and UC PIQs matter more than many students realize. Strong supplements can help demonstrate fit, intellectual curiosity, and genuine interest in a college.
What's Included
Review of 1 supplemental essay
Prompt alignment evaluation
Content and structure feedback
Voice and clarity recommendations
Evaluation of ways to strengthen and polish
Deliverables
Summary of strengths and areas of opportunity as it relates to content
Comments and suggested edits directly on your Personal Statement
Suggestions for tightening, correcting and/or polishing
Turnaround Time
72 hours (once all materials are received)
AI-Generated Writing
To provide meaningful feedback, I need to review writing that reflects the student’s own voice. I will not review essays that include sentences or paragraphs written by generative AI tools such as ChatGPT.
